Music of thunder filled our ears that night,
Drenched by the torrent were we.
Droplets like dew,
Rolling down your beautiful face,
Passing the knife sharp nose,
Down to those luscious lips,
Fading in sacred of places.
Shivering with cold and heated by love,
Hoaxed by water,
Visible was your gorgeous curves.
Inhaling your freshness,
Disappearing were those soaked clothes with my,
Act of larcenous.
Downpour was orchestrating the act of love making.
Gone are those days, with a heavy heart,
That still misses you my sweetheart.
Still I like sound of thunder,
That reminds you,
In my heart deep under.
No one will notice my pain,
Because thinking of you, I cried in rain.
Vijay
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Thanks for your comment. Everyone can do it. It just about expressing your feeling. If i can sure you can too.
Cheers
Vijay
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Lovely writing...Wish I could write like these poems with full passion...
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no re, its from an old song your post remknded me of, one i love for exactly the same reason
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That was so kind of you Sunkan.
Cheers
Vijay
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great vijay,
you make me feel wish i was the one u missing here..so good.sunkan
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Thanks Matheikal for your valuable comment.
Vijay
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That’s an amazing juxtaposition of contraries:
e.g. drenched by torrent & droplets like dew
knife-sharp nose & luscious lips
shivering with cold & heated by love
No wonder the rain remains long after the thunder is gone!
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Thanks for your heart warming comments Spk100.
Vijay
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You wrote it? wow. you know crying in rain is kind romantic and touching coz no one can see actually crying.
Thanks Monisha for stopping by.
Vijay
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if i wait for cloudy skies,
you'll never know the rain from the tears in my eyes,
you'll never know that i still love you so
i do my crying in the rain
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